Comments on the story thus far...

WAO.. I AM SO IMPRESSED!! GREAT

reading the story by zayne reminds mii of miyazaki's spirited away.

Then reading GD de reminds mii of snow queen or dunno wat piper de. lol cartoons!

I think this is a great start for us because its like setting a scenario of how we look lyk.

But however i feel that the story doesn't really can capture other people attention. the setting somehow lack content in some sense.

Maybe we could make it become something of an adventure which will make people more interested in this like next episode or something.

From what i visualise from guodong story. it feels as if its the end of the story. ya. just toys. yup. finish.

I got an idea which is super unrefined. Here it goes

" To be able to go into the midnight factory has become the dream of all kids. Thus, alot of them had tried to venture to it but could never find it. A girl name 'insert name', had a dream. It was to go into the midnight factory and become a member there. She tried to gather as much information as possible and thus begun her journey to find this midnight factory. "

Throughout her journey she met many people and been in many situation and guadually she know what is the true meaning of midnight factory and the goals of midnight factory. bla bla bla.

Then the adventures in her journey can be as much as possible, as wacky as possible, as unique as possible, anything is possible ^^